Wednesday, July 29, 2015

Holidays are so short

          Holiday are so short


Don’t you just love waking up at the time you want to?
I deeply believe that the holidays should be 3 weeks not 2. In my opinion we should be able to have just one more week.


Firstly if you like to have a week to sit down and get over work well we need a lot of time to get over school and 2 weeks just good like that. Don’t you get that feeling when you  go and see your family and the weeks go so fast that we have not spend a lot of time with them.


Secondly we need a 3 week holiday so we can fit everything we want to do when we have 2  weeks is hard to fit in all the thing that you want. Do you rather be at school and work or at home sleeping.


Lasty I deeply believe that we should have one more extra week do all of our stuff to do.Don’t you just love to relax and letting yourself go?

Don’t you just love holidays?


By Madison

3 comments:

  1. Madison you have done a good job of writing this. It looks like you have made sure that it makes sense and have used some emotive words.

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  2. I like how you have hooked me in with introduction by asking a question Madison. Next time I think you should add more sentences in your paragraphs.

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